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Elizabeth InchbaldREMARKS [on Much Ado About Nothing]. 1
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The story of this comedy is supposed, by Pope, to have been taken from the fifth book of Ariosto's Orlando Furioso.2

Steevens says, there is as remote an original to be traced in Spenser's "Fairy Queen."3

"Much ado about Nothing" has more charms in its dialogue, than in its fable, or events. The first plot appears a trivial one, because all the incidents of note, which arise from it, are connected with persons of so little consequence in the piece, that their vicissitudes of fortune excite not that hope, fear, nor curiosity in the audience, which more important characters would inspire.

Claudio and Hero4 are said to be in love, but they say so little about it themselves, that no strong sympathy is created, either by their joys, or their sorrows, their expectations or disappointments;—though, such is the reverence for justice implanted in humankind, that every spectator feels a degree of delight in the final vindication of her innocence, and the confusion of her guilty accusers.

Those persons, for whom the hearts of the audience b 2[Page 4]are most engaged, have, on the contrary, scarce one event to aid their personal interest: every occurrence, which befalls them, depends solely on the pitiful act of private listening. If Benedick or Beatrice5 had possessed perfectly good manners, or just notions of honour and delicacy, so as to have refused to have become eves-droppers, the action of the play must have stood still, or some better method have been contrived—a worse hardly could—to have imposed on their mutual credulity.

But this willingness to overhear conversations, the reader will find to be the reigning fashion with the dramatis personæ of this play; for there are nearly as many unwarrantable listeners, as there are characters in it.

But, in whatever failings the ill-bred custom of Messina may have involved the said Benedick and Beatrice, they are both highly entertaining, and most respectable personages. They are so witty, so jocund, so free from care, and yet so sensible of care in others, that the best possible reward is conferred on their merit—marriage with each other.

What Dr. Johnson has said in respect to authors writing characters for provincial, or foreign pronunciation, may be applied to those, who produce such parts as Dogberry,6 that please merely by misapplication of words—"This mode of forming ridiculous characters, can confer praise only on him who originally discovered it, for it requires not much either of wit, or judgment. Its success must be derived almost wholly from the player; but its power in a skilful mouth, even he who despises it, is unable to resist."7

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Shakspeare has given such an odious character of the bastard, John,8 in this play, and of the bastard, Edmund, in King Lear, that, had those dramas been written in the time of Charles the Second, the author must have been suspected of disaffection to half the court.9

Notes

1.  "Remarks." Much Ado About Nothing; A Comedy, In Five Acts; By William Shakspeare. As Performed at the Theatres Royal, Drury Lane and Covent Garden. Printed Under the Authority of the Managers From the Prompt Book. With Remarks by Mrs. Inchbald, London: Printed for Longman, Hurst, Rees, and Orme, Paternoster Row, pp. 3-5. The British Theatre; or, A Collection of Plays, Which Are Acted At the Theatres Royal, Drury Lane, Covent Garden, and Haymarket. Printed Under the Authority of the Managers from the Prompt Books. With Biographical and Critical Remarks, by Mrs. Inchbald. In Twenty-Five Volumes. Vol. II. King Henry IV. First Part. King Henry IV. Second Part. Merchant of Venice. King Henry V. Much Ado About Nothing. London: Printed for Longman, Hurst, Rees, and Orme, Paternoster Row. 1808. The first performance of this play was staged in 1598 or 1599. Laura DeWitt and Mary A. Waters edited this essay for The Criticism Archive. Back

2.  Stated in Johnson and Steevens' The Plays of William Shakspeare. With the Corrections and Illustrations of Various Commentators (1773), vol. 2, p. 224. Lodovico Ariosto's Orlando Furioso is a chivalric romance epic which may have influenced Shakespeare through a possible character archetype for Benedick. Back

3.  Stated in Johnson and Steevens' The Plays of William Shakspeare. With the Corrections and Illustrations of Various Commentators (1773), vol. 2, p. 224. Spenser's The Faerie Queene contains a plot similar to that of Claudio and Hero in Much Ado About Nothing. Back

4.  Count of Florence and daughter of Leonato, governor of Messina, respectively. One of the play's two plots hinges on Claudio falling in love with Hero, then being deceived that she is unfaithful. After publicly denouncing her, he learns the truth, regrets his harsh actions, and eventually they reconcile and marry. Back

5.  Benedick is a lord and soldier from Padua, and Beatrice is the niece of Leonato. Back

6.  As the constable charged with Messina's night watch, the ridiculous and incompetent Dogberry has an over-inflated perception of his importance to the town. Back

7.  From Johnson and Steevens' The Plays of William Shakspeare. With the Corrections and Illustrations of Various Commentators (1773), vol. 1, p. 312. Back

8.  Don John, the illegitimate brother of Don Pedro, Prince of Aragon. Back

9.  The court of King Charles II was notorious for its moral laxity. Charles acknowledged at least 12 illegitimate children with several mistresses. Back